Well am not a person who follows poems much.... But I think u can make it more simple.... Seems u r so full of ideas that smetimes u r cnfusd which 2 convey. If u r mre specific it wil luk mre convincng... I may b wrong.. Dats what I felt. Bt to put sme thoughts into wrds s nt easy 4 many.. Hats off 4 ur attempts...
I get your point dear...So far, my main attempt has been to form poems in a rhyming fashion...For which i at times mercilessly complicate the ideas so much... that there is always the risk that though it might "sound" fine, it might not be conveyed effectively! You inspire me to start thinking differently from nowon!! :) Thank U for ur honest feedback and encouragement!! :)
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Well am not a person who follows poems much....
But I think u can make it more simple....
Seems u r so full of ideas that smetimes u r cnfusd which 2 convey. If u r mre specific it wil luk mre convincng... I may b wrong.. Dats what I felt. Bt to put sme thoughts into wrds s nt easy 4 many.. Hats off 4 ur attempts...
Neer...
I get your point dear...So far, my main attempt has been to form poems in a rhyming fashion...For which i at times mercilessly complicate the ideas so much... that there is always the risk that though it might "sound" fine, it might not be conveyed effectively!
You inspire me to start thinking differently from nowon!! :) Thank U for ur honest feedback and encouragement!! :)
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